Friday, April 27, 2012

Flim Post

The Blind Side. Dir. John Lee Hancock. Perf. Quinton Aaron, Sandra Bullock and Tim McGraw. Alcon Entertainment, 2009. DVD.
Summary:
 
This movie is about a boy who grew up in the "projects" and a family found him on the side of the road and took him in. The family adopted the boy, Michael Oher. He gets started in football at his new high school, Wingate, where he has a very successful career and every college wants him to come there. He ends up choosing the University of Mississippi and then was drafted by the Ravens in 2009.
Analysis:
This piece relates to my topic because Michael is a offensive tackle and they are the second most paid player in the NFL because they protect the quarterbacks “blind side”. They are paid so much because they prevent a lot of injuries of the quarterback and are very hard to find a guy with the perfect body shape. This is a credible source because it’s fairly recent and a true story.

Wednesday, April 25, 2012

Fiction "Pop"

Korman, Gordon. Pop. New York: Balzer & Bray, 2009. Print.
Summary:
A boy named Marcus moved from a small town where he was the quarterback, football star to a big town where the team was a close knit group and had a perfect season last year. Marcus met this man randomly at the park who turned out to be an NFL veteran know for good hits. This veteran named Charlie happened to be the quarterbacks dad in the new town. Marcus moved from quarterback to defense. Marcus learns that Charlie has alzhiemers disease from all of the hits he took in football and that's why his kids had to take such close care of him.
Analysis:
I thought this piece fit well with my topic, it was about injuries in sports. But this book talked about injuries that were recieved many years after the sport was played. So even if you are safe while playing the sport and never get injured there you may still end up with injuries, or in this case alzheimers when you grow old. Which is another reason why people need to take prevention of injuries seriously now, because if Charlie Popvich had alzhiemers imgaine what other athletes who are getting injured during the game could end up with.  

Paragraph:
"Marcus exhaled sharply....witha fourteen-year career."

I found this passage suprising and interesting because it is about Marcus finding out the buddy he made down at the park was a professional football player. Any person finding out they have been hanging out with a professional athlete is pretty exciting. This passage also surprised me because Marcus didn't ever expect anything of his athletic ablitiy, he wanted to learn more about Charlie and why he was so important to the town because of how his kids treated him and kept such a close eye on him. This passgae lead to the rest of the book of Marcus finding out Charlie had Alzhiemers and understanding why the kids kept such a close eye on Charlie.


Reviews:
Most poeple on goodreads.com rated this book 3 stars, so an average book. They thought it was a good read but for the age level it was written for the children reading the book were being exposed to too much sexual content and alcoholic parties.

Barnes and Noble reviewers said it was a 5 star book. They enjoyed this book because it teaches a teenager how to get through problems, and there are unpredictable twist in the plot and you can never expect what is going to happen next. They said this book supports friendship, sports and bravery.


 
 

Monday, April 23, 2012

Non fiction Post

Edmonds, Molly. Discovery Health. Discovery. Web. 23 Apr. 2012.  http://health.howstuffworks.com/human-body/systems/nervous-system/teenage-brain1.htm.
 I chose an article about the development of the teenage brain. It talks about how your brain isn't fully developed until you are twenty years old, with the prefrontal cortex taking longer to develop this causes the risky behaviors you do not see in adults.  Teenagers use the back of the brain for decision making whereas adults use the front of the brain, which causes adults to make decisions more quickly. The horomones in a teenage brain cause them to be very emotional and have risky behaviors.
 
I think this is a credible source. The article has an author and is from a big named magazine that deals with health. The article also relates to my topic because if you injure part of the brain it may slow development or stop the development from part of the brain completely, and in teenagers the development of the brain is very important. The article also has many sources from different news pieces.
 
 

Wednesday, April 18, 2012

Web Content #3

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5nVWRZuthcs

This Youtube Video talks about rehabilitiation and to prevent injuries. The hockey team was taught good ways to lift without getting hurt and improve body strength.

I think this is a credible source, it's from Mayo-Clinic and has a trainer talking in it. It is older, but it relates well to my topic of ways to prevent injuries.

Web Content #2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eUitt_XQ2pQ&feature=related

159 concussions reported in the NFL in 2010. This article is about the effects concussions have on the body and symptoms of concussions. If not healed completely it is much easier to get another concussion or cause death.

I think this is a semi credible source. It relates well to my topic because it talks about how often concussions happen. But the author doesn't mention many sources. It is a fairly new article from last spring.

Web Content #1

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LifIivSWkkc

This is about ways to prevent injuries in young people and a girl who tore her ACL playing lacrosse. Somethings you can do is stretch and build muscle strength.

I think this is a kind of credible source, it fits well with my topic of young people preventing injuires because it gives a few ways to prevent them but I feel as if I could find a better one with more options. There is no sources used in the web content. It is also a couple years old.

Wednesday, April 4, 2012

Capstone Blog Post #10

Startribune
Summary: This article is about a boy who was paralyzed this winter from a hit from behind in hockey. He had surgery on his spinal cord but the doctors believe he will never be able to walk or skate again.
Analysis: I think this is a credible source, there is an author, it's for a newspaper near the accident, the date is right after the accident happened, and the purpose of the article was to inform people of what happened.
Biblography:
 Olson, Jeremy, and Davyd La Vaque. "High Schools." Doctors Say Hockey Player's Injury Can't Be   Fixed by Surgery. 5 Jan. 2012. Web. 04 Apr. 2012. <http://www.startribune.com/sports/preps/136697323.html?page=all>.

Capstone Blog Post #9

1)      Cdc.Gov
Summary: This article talks about statistics about injuries in high school sports. 80% of injuries are caused from previous injuries.
Analysis: I think this is a credible site. It has many references, an author, and the purpose of the article is to inform people.
Bibliography:
"Sport Related Injuires among High School Athletes." Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, 26 Sept. 2006. Web. 02 Apr. 2012. <http://www.cdc.gov/mmwr/preview/mmwrhtml/mm5538a1.htm>.

Capstone Blog Post #8

1)      Stop Sport injuries
Summary: Article is a bunch of statistics about high school athlete’s injuries. They account for about 2 million injuries and 30,000 hospital visits.
Analysis: I don’t think this is a credible source. The website doesn’t look like a credible source also the article doesn’t have a date or an author. And it’s only sources are from other websites.
Bibliography:
"Youth Sports Injuries Statistics." Statistics. Stop Sport Injuries. Web. 02 Apr. 2012. <http://www.stopsportsinjuries.org/media/statistics.aspx>.

Capstone Blog Post #7

    ESPN.com
Summary: This article is about people being hazed. Most of which the person being hazed was injured. This happens to 80 percent of college athletes!
Analysis: I think this is a credible source. It has sources and a date, but no author but the company ESPN took responsibility for the article. This articles purpose is to inform people that hazing hurts people and it shouldn’t be done.
Bibliography:
"Sports Hazing Incidents." ESPN.com. Web. 2 Apr. 2012.  http://espn.go.com/otl/hazing/list.html.

Capstone Blog Post #6



   BRAINLINE.COM
Summary: This article is about the risks players take, what they need to be aware of, and ways to prevent injuries. Sports have many positives to a person’s life but if played wrong they can change your life forever.
Analysis:  I don’t think this is a credible source there is no author, no date and no resources.
Bibliography:
"Sports Injuries - Brain Injury Resource | BrainLine.org." Traumatic Brain Injury. Web. 28 Mar. 2012.<http://www.brainline.org/landing_pages/categories/sportsinjuries.html?gclid=CILDy8vThK8CFSQCQAodNzYc5A>.

Capstone Blog Post #5

    Time
Summary:   This is an article about spinal injuries and how athletes suffer major injuries because they aren’t taught properly how to tackle which causes many serious injuries.
Analysis:  This article is from a big news site. It has an author; it’s from January of two years ago. The purpose of the article is to inform people of what is going on in sports these days, and how injuries are on the rise. I think it is a credible source. They also reference other health sites
Bibliography:
Bissinger, Buzz. "Texas Football and the Price of Paralysis." Time. Time, 27 Jan. 2010. Web. 28 Mar. 2012. <http://www.time.com/time/magazine/article/0,9171,1957463,00.html>.

Capstone Blog Posts #4

1)      ABC
Summary: This article talks about how many injuries happen in different sports each year, and ways to prevent them. In 2007-08 season of high school soccer there was 400 soccer injuries. That’s a rate of 2.35 per 1000 athletes.
Analysis: I think this article is credible. It’s from a big new site and has an author. It has sources from different research places such as different high school athletic trainers, studies from National Federation of High School Associations. It is a little bit older being from 2008.
Bibliography:
CHAN, JENNY, and JOSEPH BROWNSTEINABC News Medical Unit. "11 Injury-Prone High School Sports." ABC News. ABC News Network, 13 Nov. 2008. Web. 28 Mar. 2012. <http://abcnews.go.com/Health/PainManagement/story?id=6198970>.

Capstone Blog Post #3

1)      SB Nation
Summary: This article is about two high school athletes that got paralyzed from hits from behind in hockey, which are illegal. One of the kids Jenna might regain feeling in her legs but the other Jack will never unless he proves the testing wrong, which is unlikely. These hits were within a week of each other.
Analysis:  I think this is a credible source because it is written by a NHL contributor so he is around hockey a lot and it is his job to keep updated about hockey. And also the article was written shortly after the accidents happened. The only problem I see with the article is that no sources were identified.
Bibliography:
Ciskie, Bruce. "Jack Jablonski, Jenna Privette Stories Should Scare Us All." SBNation.com. 11 Jan. 2012. Web. 28 Mar. 2012. <http://www.sbnation.com/nhl/2012/1/11/2695386/jack-jablonski-jenna-privette-paralyzed-hockey-player-minnesota>.

Capstone Blog Post #2

         CNN
Summary:  This article is about a cheerleader who was dropped and hit her head, fractured her skull, and had a concussion. It lead to a long-lasting anxiety and depression of the parents.  The injuries not only affect the athlete’s life but their families as well. The article also talks about other children’s injuries and how their lives may never be the same.
Analysis: I think this is a credible article. The article is recent and has an author and it is from a big news company. They use sources from the children’s parents, sources for the statistics and a few doctors talk.  
Bibliography:
Gumbrecht, Jamie. "Dealing with the Aftermath of a Serious High School Sports Injury." CNN. Cable News Network, 04 Oct. 2011. Web. 28 Mar. 2012. <http://www.cnn.com/2011/US/10/04/cnnheroes.sports.injuries/index.html>.

Capstone Blog Posts #1

            Science Daily
Summary:  This article talks about the most common injuries in the knee. Most of which are ligament tears.  Knee injuries are 45 percent of all sport related injuries to high school kids.  Girls have a longer recovery time than boys with a knee related injury and are more likely to need surgery. Most of the knee injuries happen from illegal activity in the sporting event
Analysis:  I think this author is a little credible but I think there are better articles out there. The author is never stated and the article is fairly old. The purpose of this is to inform people which is needed but the only source they used is from Ohio State University College of Medicine.
Bibliography:

Nationwide Children's Hospital. "High School Knee Injuries By Sport And Gender." ScienceDaily, 22 May 2008. Web. 28 Mar. 2012.

Monday, March 5, 2012

Slow Death by Rubber Duck

According to Lisa Bonos a Washington Post reviewer A Slow Death By a Rubber Duck is a hard hitting story is hard to grasp but makes you believe the future will be safer and you can make more informed choices. Also that the government will put some regulations on the chemicals that are around us.The book shows that these every day chemicals lead to many dieseases.

According to the readers at Goodreads.com they all recommend this book. They say it has a lot of helpful information, and very entertaining. It has harsh evidence but the message that is getting across is very strong. The readers said it was a good way to get informed of the chemicals around us. The book was given an overall 3.8 rating.

After starting to read this book it is surprising how many chemicals are in our everyday lives and most of them being hard to avoid. I just started reading the book but the points the author makes are very vaild and the book is interesting. It makes you wonder what is worth putting these chemicals in your body, is having good smelling shampoo and air fresheners  around your house and maybe get some sort of diesease from it or is it worth to have a fresh smelling house by opening the windows and enviornmentally friendly shampoo and having less chance for a diesease. This story has really started to make me wonder.

Thursday, March 1, 2012

Slow Death By Rubber Duck #2

I read chapter six and chapter nine. Chapter two talked about children are being exposed to the same chemicals as adults but in different ways. Children always have more contact with the environment and that makes them more exposed to chemicals. Chapter nine Detox talked about how chemical exposures used to be mostly confined to factory workers would worked low levels of industrialization, but now it has grown to everybody is affected by it every day, in almost everything we do.


"45% of all soaps on the market contained some type of antibacterial agent. Triclosan was the most common agent found" 
This shocked me because as humans we haven't always been clean. Our ancestors didn't bathe as much as we do now so they weren't exposed to as many chemicals. If we stopped using less chemical-filled products I think we would have longer lives because of what our ancestors died from we have cures for but nobody has any cures for the chemicals. If we could stop using them we would have less health problems and maybe live longer lives. Also if our whole culture was less worried about germs and bathing then it would not be as weird for people to stop showering as much.

My overall reaction of this book was it was boring. But I think it had good information I just was not interested in the topic at all. But it did make me more aware of the chemicals around me and to buy less smelly stuff and more environmentally friendly stuff. .



Friday, February 17, 2012

Enviormental Chemicals/Modern Chemicals

ARTICLE:

Smith, Stephanie. "Everyday Chemicals May Be Harming Kids, Panel Told - CNN.com." CNN.com - Breaking News, U.S., World, Weather, Entertainment & Video News. CNN.com. Web. 17 Feb. 2012. http://www.cnn.com/2010/HEALTH/10/26/senate.toxic.america.hearing/index.html.
 
 
SUMMARY:

This article talks about how children are being exposed to everyday chemicals before they come out of a mothers womb. With being exposed to chemicals more children are being born with developmental problems.

REACTION:

Learning about all the chemicals and toxins in our environment has really opened my eyes. I didn't realize how many chemicals are around us. Everything we touch could possibly be hurting us. In my article they talked about how there are 84,000 chemicals on the market today but only one percent of them have been studied for safety. But without those chemicals alot of our every day stuff wouldn't be created. But what shocked me the most is that the chemicals mothers use on a daily basis are harming their children. In 2009 researchers found that a child as an average of 232 chemicals in their blood. This children are being harmed by our enviornment before they are even breathing this air.

Tuesday, February 14, 2012

Environment





Environment is a big topic lately, everything we do affects our surroundings. I think we need to pay more attention to how we are hurting our environment. There are so many simple ways to help the environment but not enough people are willing to change their habits. Putting reusable bags in our cars instead of getting paper or plastic bags from the store is an easy way to start. The paper bags hurt the enviornment just as badly as the plastic ones do, if we stopped using them we would save a ton of resources and a lot of animals' lives. The easist change to our daily lives is bottled water, carpooling would be an easy option too.

I don't think people need to drastically change their lifestyles but some things are so easy and if you get started on them now after a while it will just become a habit and you won't even realize what you're doing. A lot of environmently friendly things would help save money for your family too. If you live close to people who are going in the same direction as you jump in one car instead of two. This will not only save gas money but it will save resources to, helping you and the environment. All you need to do is buy a couple water bottles and fill them up at home, it will be way cheaper for our families and bottled water isn't cleaned before it goes into the bottles so it is just like drinking your tap water, if not worse.

I think our government needs to be more aware of environmental issues. I think our government should stop building our cities so spread out and start building up, put apartments on top of businesses. This would help in so many ways, it would use less land and everything would be closer together. If everything is closer together then we don't need to drive, and by not driving we save resources. If the government inforced recycling so many more resources would be reused, more people than you think don't recycle which is crazy, it is so easy and it's another one of those things that if you start doing it, it will become a habit.

I feel as if we don't start to change our ways we are going to end up hurting the enviornment for good and run out of the things we love. We are using up all of our resources and if we don't do something about it eventually we won't have them, and they won't just magically appear here either. We need what the Earth provides for us and we are taking it for granted. Saving our environment will help our families save money too.



Picture Cite:
Sky-environment « Big Wave Project." Sky-environment « Big Wave Project. Web. 05 Mar. 2012. http://bigwaveproject.org/office-park/sky-environment/.